Star Ranger4 Wrote:Heh. Still missing a bit of something somewhere, that covers how the person behind this Sheppard came to identify so closely with the game character that the two have merged in his own mind. However, that could also be covered another time in another story as well. Also noticed some phrasings that feel uneven/clunky to a native english speaker, will go back through and give a rundown on those later.Thanks for the comments.
Some help on the wording would be great... I have always some difficulty to find the right words.
Yes, a little bit more about Shepard sounds like a good idea, but this will not be the last time we hear of Shepard. There are at least two ideas of event when he will be back on stage.