[Story, RFC] The spectre has arrived

[robkelk]

Keep this(that) attitude through the(delete) training, and we might(we'll definetly) have a job for you.”

I'd leave this one as "we might have a job for you". The Space Patrol isn't likely to promise anyone a job until after training, on the chance that the applicant doesn't pass the course.
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."

- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012