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[Story, RFC] The spectre has arrived
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robkelk Wrote:That was my idea behind the original sentence. Space Patrol will want to wait if the candidate does fit...Star Ranger4 Wrote:Keep this(that) attitude through the(delete) training, and we might(we'll definetly) have a job for you.”I'd leave this one as "we might have a job for you". The Space Patrol isn't likely to promise anyone a job until after training, on the chance that the applicant doesn't pass the course. 
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[Story, RFC] The spectre has arrived - by HRogge - 09-23-2011, 07:04 PM
[No subject] - by Warringer - 09-23-2011, 08:56 PM
[No subject] - by Star Ranger4 - 09-24-2011, 05:48 PM
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[No subject] - by HRogge - 09-28-2011, 10:03 AM
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