Ack.... Mal Ninja'd me.
But I can definitely work with parts of it.... when Maico meets Ben she has no idea Jet's behind the Sabers, she's just chasing up information on the KnightWing. She hasn't mentioned Jet's name, so I doubt he would either.
The plan for the story was to have her find out in a similar way Lisa does in the Sabers. She leaves Frigga disappointed that her theory about Jet was false. Anika gives her a ride home, and they get attacked. It doesn't take a genius to draw conclusions when there're only three Sabers aboard the KnightWing... and a pink hardsuit unworn.
It's also a little darker than I'd planned for the Sabers. They may be working for Great Justice but they're not a hunter-killer team. Given the choice they'll bring them in alive. It's a character point for Jet that she doesn't harm someone who surrenders, regardless. (Even though she may *want* to as Quattro found out, she considers that a line she does not cross.)
Which means that when the Patrol hit up the aftermath a Knight Saber's raid they'll find survivors either being 'guarded' by any released hostages, or tied up and locked up with a good chunk of evidence detailing their crimes.
So they'll spend the rest of their lives far from Planet Earth marooned in a single-occupant cell made from cold black stones that have never known the warming touch of sunlight. Barely alive.....
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But I can definitely work with parts of it.... when Maico meets Ben she has no idea Jet's behind the Sabers, she's just chasing up information on the KnightWing. She hasn't mentioned Jet's name, so I doubt he would either.
The plan for the story was to have her find out in a similar way Lisa does in the Sabers. She leaves Frigga disappointed that her theory about Jet was false. Anika gives her a ride home, and they get attacked. It doesn't take a genius to draw conclusions when there're only three Sabers aboard the KnightWing... and a pink hardsuit unworn.
It's also a little darker than I'd planned for the Sabers. They may be working for Great Justice but they're not a hunter-killer team. Given the choice they'll bring them in alive. It's a character point for Jet that she doesn't harm someone who surrenders, regardless. (Even though she may *want* to as Quattro found out, she considers that a line she does not cross.)
Which means that when the Patrol hit up the aftermath a Knight Saber's raid they'll find survivors either being 'guarded' by any released hostages, or tied up and locked up with a good chunk of evidence detailing their crimes.
So they'll spend the rest of their lives far from Planet Earth marooned in a single-occupant cell made from cold black stones that have never known the warming touch of sunlight. Barely alive.....
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