That's almost a better story that what I had planned. A little more conflict in things is good. Maybe it might be possible to do both?
The plan I had was for Jet and the Sabers to explain themselves to her. And their personal reasons for doing it. Anika explains how she was rescued by them. Daryl, what happened to her troubleshooter partner. Something like:
"I can't stop you publishing this. Not without doing something that crosses the line.
We don't register because we're so small, and we're going after such big fish. It wouldn't be hard for them to discover our names, then go after our friends, or our families. There's no way we can protect them any other way. We keep ourselves secret to keep them safe. And because we keep the secret safe, we can keep doing the good we do.
I think you can understand where I'm coming from."
And if Ben finds that she knows.... cue the results above.
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--m(^0^)m-- Wot, no sig?
The plan I had was for Jet and the Sabers to explain themselves to her. And their personal reasons for doing it. Anika explains how she was rescued by them. Daryl, what happened to her troubleshooter partner. Something like:
"I can't stop you publishing this. Not without doing something that crosses the line.
We don't register because we're so small, and we're going after such big fish. It wouldn't be hard for them to discover our names, then go after our friends, or our families. There's no way we can protect them any other way. We keep ourselves secret to keep them safe. And because we keep the secret safe, we can keep doing the good we do.
I think you can understand where I'm coming from."
And if Ben finds that she knows.... cue the results above.
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--m(^0^)m-- Wot, no sig?