Dartz Wrote:Another bit of story
Now I'm going to have to decide how much Miyuri knows... which is a subset of "Exactly what does Noah trust Miyuri to know?" (He and Yayoi keep secrets from Leda, so it would be out-of-character for them not to keep secrets from the other StellviaCorp shareholders.)
Luckily, this isn't something you need for your story, so I don't have to come up with an answer right now.
Dartz Wrote:Agh. Balance Balance. Maico needs to make good points, not be a receiver for Jet's own theories.
And this is becoming very bottom heavy. Any suggestions for more 'Maico Meets' up top? Cathy and CGI might be possible, but Maico has no reason to suspect Sabers use CGI tech, so no reason to look them up.
One idea: Where did the Roughriders get the raw materials for their spaceframes? I suspect they buy steel from Hephaestus (everyone else in the Belt does) ... and Hephaestus makes some 'waved alloys that can survive the industrial accident that "destroyed" those two spacecraft. If Maico was to interview WireGeek or Hermes before visiting Frigga, she might have more than just a hunch to go on that the KnightWing came from Atalantae.
This requires inserting a scene into the story and revising some of what you've already posted, though...
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