Well, adding/revising was what I'd intended.
There's plenty of space after the Benjamin Rhodes visit to add new meetings in..... either those who're in on it, or who aren't at all. The technology trail especially. There is one mentioned in story that I'd planned on writing, but decided not to because I couldn't get the character right, and it'd be much too short, just. "It's not me and I'm sick of it!" which wouldn't be fair.
Miyuri just witnessed the Sabers specifically launch from Frigga and return. Whether she was told about them or not beforehand is another matter. The disk drive Jet handed to her were contained the details of the UBA case, which is supposed to go to those 'it needs to get to'. Basically, the links between Mason and Zwilniks, proof that he's been hiring them to attack settlements that refuse to join.
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There's plenty of space after the Benjamin Rhodes visit to add new meetings in..... either those who're in on it, or who aren't at all. The technology trail especially. There is one mentioned in story that I'd planned on writing, but decided not to because I couldn't get the character right, and it'd be much too short, just. "It's not me and I'm sick of it!" which wouldn't be fair.
Miyuri just witnessed the Sabers specifically launch from Frigga and return. Whether she was told about them or not beforehand is another matter. The disk drive Jet handed to her were contained the details of the UBA case, which is supposed to go to those 'it needs to get to'. Basically, the links between Mason and Zwilniks, proof that he's been hiring them to attack settlements that refuse to join.
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