Bob, for completeness use their full names. Makes it seem all official like.
Specifics:
Nagato - Maybe a bit more on her glasses. Does her wearing them or not imply something?
Mikuru - What about the cosplay? Does she like it? Is it an act so she can spy on people (practising disguises)?
Koizumi - You may want to add something about some people thinking him a bit slimy. Is that also deliberate, or something he's trying to hide under his general demeanor? Perhaps making people suspect links to less than savoury groups.
Kyon - Honestly, I'm not sure what to add here. Maybe his ability to actually accomplish the tasks he does implies enhanced abilities?
Semi-relevent (although how much you can use I'm not sure):
The SOS-Dan are scared of A.C., which is not that unusual a condition in Fenspace (usually among the criminal element), but not for the reasons most think.
During Haruhi’s and A.C.’s first face-to-face meeting at Serenity-Con where the cyborg caused the brigade leader to publically flinch in fright, the cyborgs comments afterwards apparently meant something more to the others of the SOS-Dan.
While Haruhi recovered most of her aplomb and settled on disliking the cyberneticist (seemingly strengthened in their further encounters, where Haruhi’s always come off second best but seemingly benefited unwillingly by doing so), the others are still fairly cautious around her.
Most SOS-Dan watchers chalk it up to the same effect she has on the Professor.
Specifics:
Nagato - Maybe a bit more on her glasses. Does her wearing them or not imply something?
Mikuru - What about the cosplay? Does she like it? Is it an act so she can spy on people (practising disguises)?
Koizumi - You may want to add something about some people thinking him a bit slimy. Is that also deliberate, or something he's trying to hide under his general demeanor? Perhaps making people suspect links to less than savoury groups.
Kyon - Honestly, I'm not sure what to add here. Maybe his ability to actually accomplish the tasks he does implies enhanced abilities?
Semi-relevent (although how much you can use I'm not sure):
The SOS-Dan are scared of A.C., which is not that unusual a condition in Fenspace (usually among the criminal element), but not for the reasons most think.
During Haruhi’s and A.C.’s first face-to-face meeting at Serenity-Con where the cyborg caused the brigade leader to publically flinch in fright, the cyborgs comments afterwards apparently meant something more to the others of the SOS-Dan.
While Haruhi recovered most of her aplomb and settled on disliking the cyberneticist (seemingly strengthened in their further encounters, where Haruhi’s always come off second best but seemingly benefited unwillingly by doing so), the others are still fairly cautious around her.
Most SOS-Dan watchers chalk it up to the same effect she has on the Professor.