There's nothing wrong with that at all..
The only thing I'd suggest to add are a few known aquaintances.... who in Fenspace do they hang out with, who rescued them, who do they know? Those little hooks will help settle them into the setting. They don't even have to be existing characters. Where they ultimately choose to live might also have an affect.
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The only thing I'd suggest to add are a few known aquaintances.... who in Fenspace do they hang out with, who rescued them, who do they know? Those little hooks will help settle them into the setting. They don't even have to be existing characters. Where they ultimately choose to live might also have an affect.
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--m(^0^)m-- Wot, no sig?