Ace Dreamer Wrote:Maybe it's just me, but I read that and thought "What are his 'Angels'?"Oops. Everybody, this is why subtle references are a bad thing.
Many, many years ago, when we were discussing what television shows exist in Fenspace, I made a joke about how Noah came down hard on a Hollywood-type who wanted to cast the Stellvia top brass in a "Charlie's Angels in space" style show. Ever since then, Yayoi, Kohran, Sora, and Yomiko have been "Noah's Angels", but only on the Meta level.
Padraig is trying so hard to out-do Noah, so...
Ace Dreamer Wrote:I'd be nice if it was clearer his 'residence' was called "O'Neill", which I deduce it is by re-reading the text. Later I saw the side-box...That could be worded better, yes.
Ace Dreamer Wrote:A few ideas of things he might consider investing in, in Fenspace, might be useful to give people ideas about using this as an Open Character.Again, he wants to best Noah Scott... so look at what Stellvia Corporation has that Padraig doesn't and make something up.
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012