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[Story][Season 2]The gas station (finished)
Ace Dreamer
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08-28-2012, 09:01 AM
HRogge Wrote:
Ace Dreamer Wrote:Sounds good. A bit improvement. Couple of very minor niggles:
Added it to my gdocs... will be in the final wiki document, thank you.
My mistake, should have read a "big improvement". Smile
In the next section:
"And if the reported just had waited", should be "reporter"?
"“You mean they didn’t told them?”" should be "tell them"?
"‘but we haven’t noticed’" should be "hadn't"?
Nice piece on how politics can bite you even if you do your job as best you can!
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[Story][Season 2]The gas station (finished) - by HRogge - 06-10-2012, 09:16 PM
[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 06-10-2012, 11:25 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 06-11-2012, 02:50 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 06-11-2012, 06:29 PM
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[No subject] - by Dartz - 06-12-2012, 07:19 PM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 06-12-2012, 11:49 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 06-13-2012, 05:23 PM
[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 06-13-2012, 06:12 PM
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[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 08-26-2012, 12:28 PM
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[No subject] - by HRogge - 08-26-2012, 09:50 PM
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[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 08-28-2012, 09:01 AM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 08-29-2012, 06:21 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 08-31-2012, 05:33 PM
[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 08-31-2012, 07:31 PM
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[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 09-20-2012, 12:10 AM
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