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[Story][Season 0] In The Bluff
 
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His personality is a big change from the first series -but in a good way. He was too pasive then, clearly out of his depth, and he ended up being, basically, used by O'Neill.
Now, he has been burned once, and is reacting to prevent a second trick. He is a bit too forceful, but that may be a front, to cover his nervousness. A scene at the end, or in the next chapter, here he gets the shakes once he is alone and safe may be a good idea.
If he is using a front, then Kelly will probably notice; her detectine "experience" should be able to spot the signs, and not be too hurt. And realising she has limits with someone safe -ideed, far safer than her Boss- will be very good for her.

Now, and that is an important plot point, wich may destroy all of Arthur's attempts at secrecy... did she recognice Arthur's voice?
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[Story][Season 0] In The Bluff - by Ace Dreamer - 07-14-2012, 03:33 AM
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