[Story][Season 0] Consolidated Failure

[Norgarth]

"I am the Dread Pirate Roberta!"  Seemed a bit over-done, thought Arthur.  "So, you are going to kill me?"  "Tell me why I should make an exception!"

I believe that should be 3 separate paragraphs.  You're supposed to start a new one whenever a different person speaks.
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