Timote Wrote:"I am the Dread Pirate Roberta!" Seemed a bit over-done, thought Arthur. "So, you are going to kill me?" "Tell me why I should make an exception!"True. But, I thought I'd see how it went a one paragraph, as it looked very sparse split into three or four.
I believe that should be 3 separate paragraphs. You're supposed to start a new one whenever a different person speaks.
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"It is the business of the future to be dangerous" - Hawkwind