Got potential...
I think he needs a bit more 'character', 'hooks' to hang an understanding on of who he is, what he is likely to do. Maybe some hobbies? Does he have any relationships with people? Have any prized possessions? Pets? Favourite art, media or fiction? If he gets in a fight, what is his preferred combat style? Weapons (you imply guns)?
I like the history, but I think you could do with more than him being unflappable, good with people and bureaucracy, and hacking. Something to add 'colour'?
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"It is the business of the future to be dangerous" - Hawkwind
I think he needs a bit more 'character', 'hooks' to hang an understanding on of who he is, what he is likely to do. Maybe some hobbies? Does he have any relationships with people? Have any prized possessions? Pets? Favourite art, media or fiction? If he gets in a fight, what is his preferred combat style? Weapons (you imply guns)?
I like the history, but I think you could do with more than him being unflappable, good with people and bureaucracy, and hacking. Something to add 'colour'?
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"It is the business of the future to be dangerous" - Hawkwind