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[RFC]For Tailed Ones
Ace Dreamer
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#17
09-16-2012, 07:52 PM
HRogge Wrote:Wikified http://fenspace.net/index.php5?title=For_Tailed_Ones
Looks good.
The text around the 'boarding torpedo' incident needs some more attention.
I think you could usefully make clear that 'Kiri' and 'Paulownia' are the same thing.
It might be worth saying what the catgirls were doing to pay for their CHON before the company started, i.e. what other small industries might already exist, and/or whether they were supported by one or more other factions.
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[RFC]For Tailed Ones - by HRogge - 09-15-2012, 09:47 AM
[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 09-15-2012, 12:03 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 09-15-2012, 12:13 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-15-2012, 04:07 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 09-15-2012, 04:19 PM
[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 09-16-2012, 12:22 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 09-16-2012, 12:34 PM
[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 09-16-2012, 02:50 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 09-16-2012, 03:00 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 09-16-2012, 06:36 PM
[No subject] - by Star Ranger4 - 09-16-2012, 07:08 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 09-16-2012, 07:20 PM
[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 09-16-2012, 07:34 PM
[No subject] - by Star Ranger4 - 09-16-2012, 07:34 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 09-16-2012, 07:50 PM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 09-16-2012, 07:52 PM
[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 09-16-2012, 07:52 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 09-16-2012, 08:04 PM
[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 09-16-2012, 08:27 PM
[No subject] - by Star Ranger4 - 09-16-2012, 10:54 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-17-2012, 01:21 AM
[No subject] - by Rakhasa - 09-17-2012, 02:03 AM
[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 09-17-2012, 02:41 AM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 09-17-2012, 07:50 AM
[No subject] - by Rakhasa - 09-17-2012, 12:28 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-17-2012, 02:20 PM
[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 09-17-2012, 03:54 PM
[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 09-17-2012, 04:18 PM
[No subject] - by Star Ranger4 - 09-17-2012, 04:40 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 09-17-2012, 04:48 PM
[No subject] - by Rakhasa - 09-17-2012, 04:54 PM
[No subject] - by Star Ranger4 - 09-17-2012, 05:20 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 09-17-2012, 05:52 PM
[No subject] - by Foxboy - 09-18-2012, 07:49 PM
[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 09-18-2012, 08:08 PM
[No subject] - by Star Ranger4 - 09-18-2012, 08:16 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 09-18-2012, 08:17 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-22-2012, 05:33 PM
[No subject] - by Ace Dreamer - 09-23-2012, 06:14 PM

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