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Pavonis, NERV, and SEELE
 
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I've finally read the revised text (in post #18)...

It's... a big place. Very big. As big as Kandor City, and without as large a labour supply to build the place. And dug-in rather than built on the surface, which takes even more labour.

And the technology is very advanced for Season 0 and Season 1.

Might I suggest scaling the arcology back substantially for the 2009-2013 period, and have what you've written be the state of affairs as of 2023 after a decade of expansion and innovation?

Oh, and a few minor points:

Quote:Seemingly all fantasy-minded short of the Wizards and D&Ders decided to band together to claim a homeland for themselves on the Red Planet.
Well, there are also the gamers at Crystal Seattle, the Renfaire folks at 4860 Gubbio, and the dwarf bar "Valhalla" on Greenwood Station... and The Watch (the Discworld fen) practically everywhere.

Quote:Due to a bit of secretly purposeful micro-managing by several SEELE Council members, Toyota and Ford each opened shops on the same day at the same time on 24 May 2019 on Copperhead Road in New Port City across from the Rubber Duck Trucking Company –they each claim right of “first car dealership off of Earth.”
I thought we already had a car dealership somewhere... (goes and looks) ...apparently not. (I do vaguely remember an idea that StellviaCorp was going to get into that business, it being a logical extension of the trading they already do, but it looks like I never actually did anything with the idea. I snooze, I lose.)

Quote:Whoever Melchior consists of, however, is classified.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sharon,_Lois_%26_Bram]Sharon, Lois & Bram.
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Pavonis, NERV, and SEELE - by DeputyJones - 10-24-2012, 10:08 PM
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[No subject] - by robkelk - 10-25-2012, 12:40 AM
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