DeputyJones Wrote:Rather than the story taking place during the interview, however, it takes place afterwards while Alex is watching the interview at a hotel in Coruscant. While watching it he has flashbacks about how everything started. Sound good?I've dabbled with the "flashback" style of writing, with mixed success (http://www.fenspace.net/index.php5?title=First_Flight]good and http://www.fenspace.net/index.php5?titl ... n_Immortal]not-so-good). If you're comfortable with it, why not?
DeputyJones Wrote:Also, I'm a little curious about what's thought about the Elysium Cooperative. Does it screw up anybody's ideas-in-the-works or is it good to go?You aren't stepping on my toes...
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012