I like this -- well, I liked it in its original form in the source thread, too, but I like how you've whipped it into shape here.
One thing for the "Difference" section -- I seem to recall that someone in, oh, I think it was Disturbing Implications of Land Rising Into the Sky, suggested that the crew of the Grover's Corners were tantamount to a new faction simply for the combination of their bragging rights and economic clout; that kind of qualification for a faction might be worth mentioning along with the drive and charisma that typify the SOS-Dan.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
One thing for the "Difference" section -- I seem to recall that someone in, oh, I think it was Disturbing Implications of Land Rising Into the Sky, suggested that the crew of the Grover's Corners were tantamount to a new faction simply for the combination of their bragging rights and economic clout; that kind of qualification for a faction might be worth mentioning along with the drive and charisma that typify the SOS-Dan.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.