Did a quick once-over of the story. Will read it again later, focused on the Grover's Corner bits for definition. Do you have anything you want pictured?
ETA: I could really use a sense of scale. How big should that garage be? If you look, it's freaking ginormous (there's a '36 coupe on the pad to the left).
ETA: I could really use a sense of scale. How big should that garage be? If you look, it's freaking ginormous (there's a '36 coupe on the pad to the left).