Dakota, I have no problem whatsoever with your snippet.
I would like to ask that everyone else interested in posting a bit of story to the thread please wait a few days, however. Since I wasn't as clear as I thought I was when explain just what Counter-Earth is (as well as something else I want to do), I will post my Prologue for the story in a few days which will hopefully clear these questions up. I still need to complete said Prologue, however, as I hadn't planned on having to post it until June 1st.
I would like to ask that everyone else interested in posting a bit of story to the thread please wait a few days, however. Since I wasn't as clear as I thought I was when explain just what Counter-Earth is (as well as something else I want to do), I will post my Prologue for the story in a few days which will hopefully clear these questions up. I still need to complete said Prologue, however, as I hadn't planned on having to post it until June 1st.
Quote:Everybody keeps telling me that I'm good at this type of writing, so why doesn't anybody trust me to write this sort of thing?Robkelk, please do not in any way think that I don't like your writing.
Quote:If what I understood wasn't what you meant, then I need it explained in different words...Counter-Earth is a crossover world. It is, however, a crossover world that did not exist prior to being injected into Fenspace's universe. Counter-Earth is the result of celestials taking the reality shards that would have otherwise merged with Fenspace Earth and molding, trimming, and spit-shining them until they were their own, separate Earth with their own, intact timeline.