Quote:As to Mars, that's kind of something I REAAALY need to stay as is.
Why?
Here's my disconnect: You've used segfaulting god-wishes to turn Ordinary Mars into Pulp-Fantasy Mars. And that's cool. I'm not saying it's a bad idea. But it's an idea that can stand on its own. I don't see why this needs to be here when you've got Counter-Earth right there to act as your main focus. You're doing the idea a disservice by saying 'oh yeah and Mars got fucked up by malfunctioning wishes' and only doing the absolute minimum with it. Conversely if Mars is going to be a big deal you're doing the same disservice to Counter-Earth.
My recommendation would be to either cut the first boon entirely if you're planning on using Counter-Earth to any great degree, or cut Counter-Earth if you're unwilling to remove the boon and its effects. Maybe somebody else can come up with other alternatives, but those are the two strongest I can see from here.
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