Gideon020 Wrote:In any case, I tried my best but its clear that these people aren't going to work for Fenspace in this current form. Too many inconsistencies and flaws and too much missing information. So I'm just going to strip what I've placed so I can rewrite the whole damn thing.Keep the core idea but tone them down a bit in your rewrite. I think the idea itself will make a good contribution to Fenspace.
Just compare them to the rest of the small groups/factions, you don't need to be "more" than everyone to start a successful story.
I think the other advantage beginning smaller is that you have space to grow into, more options to continue their story. When you start with large operations on half a dozen planetary systems, multiple (hidden) factory complexes that turn out weapons like being at war, hidden caches throughout the edge of the solar system and similar things there is not that much you go next.
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oh, and think about hopping into the Fenspace IRC from time to time.
