Ross Van Loan Wrote:I should think that Fenputers would make Microsoft products seem sane, viable and bug-free by comparison.I hadn't even noticed that... consciously, at least. As for the Shegoth strike, they might find the trip a bit long. Ultima station is one of the major jumping-off spots for interstellar trips.
Good opening, Rob : I like the implied future conflict between spunky, allegorically named youth ( What gulf will she bridge, I wonder?) & upfront Fate...uh, Karma...uh, Lachesis. Will Lynne survive her Destinee with her spunk intact? If you find your story developing darkly I can arrange for Lynne to be rescued by a surgical Shegoth strike.
Oh, yes - I'm enjoying creating the images for each scene... so I'll keep doing that.
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012