And I realise I've made a drastic mistake. by not coming up with a proper antagonist first. I suppose it doesn't technically matter, considering it's not the main thrust of the story... I should've worked this out beforehand but I pushed ahead to pop some life into the forum.
Anyway. Who would do this? Why? What could be important enough to be worth shooting down random pilots when they fly overhead?
Can we work something solid out here? Where I wanted to go needs someone capable of providing a worthy opponent to a combat cyborg running close to the ragged edge. (I'd hoped the last scene would suggest that something wasn't right - Jet's running right over him. I might've done it wrong)
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--m(^0^)m-- Wot, no sig?
Anyway. Who would do this? Why? What could be important enough to be worth shooting down random pilots when they fly overhead?
Can we work something solid out here? Where I wanted to go needs someone capable of providing a worthy opponent to a combat cyborg running close to the ragged edge. (I'd hoped the last scene would suggest that something wasn't right - Jet's running right over him. I might've done it wrong)
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--m(^0^)m-- Wot, no sig?