This Arc felt like it was part of the original story to me. I like the use of the Unknown Assailant Group/Forsaken, I think they worked VERY well. The dialogue
didn't feel as smooth as some of your other writing, but like you said, Serious stuff is not your forte. It was still a great story, well written. Precis
(db scrapper) and Min took this one on, and having the "pets" was fun/helpful. I gave it 4 stars.
didn't feel as smooth as some of your other writing, but like you said, Serious stuff is not your forte. It was still a great story, well written. Precis
(db scrapper) and Min took this one on, and having the "pets" was fun/helpful. I gave it 4 stars.