Foxboy Wrote:The only problem I see is some minor "Idiot Ball" plot elements and an In-joke plot not a lot of people will get. [Not including the in-jokeIdiot ball?
character only two people here get.]
*I* enjoyed it. There's just some folks won't like that it's a "pseudo-origin" story with no way out of Paragon. Of course these are the
same people who deride "Scratching Post" as cliche and Mary Sue.
Thank you two for trying it btw

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