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Untitled Story Piece
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With red caps they're almost certainly in Croatoa.
I think there's always been a campus in Steel, it just hasn't been important before. There's certainly a spot with an identical sculpture, just as there is over in Founder's Falls. I think that "stone sphere with a chunk cut out" is indicative of a university branch campus anywhere in the city...
Meanwhile, on the subject of the story... I'm looking forward to more. You might want to work on your phrasing a bit, though, D -- the bit about the hero with the "skull melted into his helmet" made me think he had suffered some horrible injury for a moment.

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Untitled Story Piece - by Drenivian - 04-04-2007, 02:29 PM
Re: Untitled Story Piece - by His Lovely Wife - 04-04-2007, 04:05 PM
Re: Untitled Story Piece - by Bob Schroeck - 04-04-2007, 07:23 PM
Re: Untitled Story Piece - by His Lovely Wife - 04-04-2007, 07:57 PM
well - by Drenivian - 04-05-2007, 02:09 PM

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