Nice stuff, so far, Bert -- both the original and the revision. As Acyl has already noted, you've put some serious thought into the "reality" of being a catgirl, especially the downsides, which makes for characterization that rings true. Good work, wanna see more!
-- Bob
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-- Bob
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Visit beautiful Boston, proud successor to Seattle as
"City Most Scared Of Its Own Shadow