Tales of The Legendary: Emerald Blast

[Sofaspud]

At first I was trying to figure out what you meant -- when I wrote it, there was only one POV change intended, at the end after the doctor left -- but then I
think I spotted it. You're talking about this, I think:

Eva whirled her sword and attempted a slice, but it was caught by the manipulator claw. She gritted her teeth and began to draw it out, counting on its
magically-keen edge and her own enhanced strength to win her blade free, but the momentary pause was enough

That is, in fact, an error; it should still be from the doctor's POV. I'll edit it to correct that. If that's not where you were
talking about, please speak up! I'm a big boy, I can take it. *braces for impact*

As for the intended POV switch, I think it's due to the way the board formatted everything, because in my original version there's whitespace to
indicate the change. I've edited it to include a *** bit, which hopefully does the trick?

Council was what I had in mind originally, but I tried to leave it vague enough that it could be taken for a strike force of masterminds and ???, or J. Random
Encounter. I didn't think they needed too much detail, personally; they're the Bad Guys.

Thanks for the feedback, by the way. I really appreciate it.

--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs