"Tales of the Legendary" as a title actually comes from Bob's Evangelia short. I stole it for the reasonably long Space Mage fic, and sometime later the really tiny Light Errant piece. I'm surprised Mr. Schroeck didn't mention it himself. =)
That aside...this was really really good. Absolutely-freakin'-brilliant. Great characterisation and narrative, wonderful character. The only thing that threw me has already been mentioned by Bob - there's that one paragraph in the fight scene where perspective seems to switch to third person interior from Evangelia's point of view. I found the actual transition at the end okay though.
And the bit with Alistair's observation...an observation from the INVISIBLE MAGICAL PENGUIN... is brilliant.
-- Acyl
That aside...this was really really good. Absolutely-freakin'-brilliant. Great characterisation and narrative, wonderful character. The only thing that threw me has already been mentioned by Bob - there's that one paragraph in the fight scene where perspective seems to switch to third person interior from Evangelia's point of view. I found the actual transition at the end okay though.
And the bit with Alistair's observation...an observation from the INVISIBLE MAGICAL PENGUIN... is brilliant.
-- Acyl