Re: Emerald's POV, I don't think it's necessary for this sequence. I can't improve on what Sweno wrote, and -- in all honesty -- Emerald spent
most of the time out of her flippin' gourd. Hardly the sort of thing to make for an interesting read, unless
you're a psychiatrist.![[Image: smile.gif]](http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/images/emoticons/smile.gif)
(And let's not even get into the mental contortions I'd need to write it, for that matter.)
However, I've got a couple ideas in mind for other events. Next time all three of us are online I'll bounce 'em off ya.
Oh, and: I'm with Wiregeek -- very nicely done on the 'fade out' scene. Always better implied than examined in detail, in my opinion. I said
it before, but it's worth repeating: great work, Sweno!
--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs
most of the time out of her flippin' gourd. Hardly the sort of thing to make for an interesting read, unless
you're a psychiatrist.
(And let's not even get into the mental contortions I'd need to write it, for that matter.)
However, I've got a couple ideas in mind for other events. Next time all three of us are online I'll bounce 'em off ya.
Oh, and: I'm with Wiregeek -- very nicely done on the 'fade out' scene. Always better implied than examined in detail, in my opinion.
I saidit before, but it's worth repeating: great work, Sweno!
--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs