I like this. I'm not at all familiar with, um, either of the characters involved -- or if I am, it's not clicking who's who -- but it's a nice
piece. I'm sitting here trying to puzzle out where it's going, that's always a good sign.
One part that puzzles me is... what exactly did Walker do regarding the boarding call? I can tell that Elizabeth figured *something* out, but it's too
subtle for me.
Other than that... y'all make me feel like an amateur, y'know? Well, I am, but you get what I mean. Sheesh.![[Image: smile.gif]](http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/images/emoticons/smile.gif)
--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs
piece. I'm sitting here trying to puzzle out where it's going, that's always a good sign.
One part that puzzles me is... what exactly did Walker do regarding the boarding call? I can tell that Elizabeth figured *something* out, but it's too
subtle for me.
Other than that... y'all make me feel like an amateur, y'know? Well, I am, but you get what I mean. Sheesh.
--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs