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Tales of the Legendary: Duty to the Innocent
 
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Muhaha, now you must write more!
-ahem- sorry did that come out wrong?
Good stuff. I certainly never gave thought to how annoying it would be to be known as 'super' when trying to maintain a distinct civilian identity.
I'm assuming that Brahela did some heroing before deciding it wasn't the life for her, for whatever reason?

minor nit pick:
Quote:"You didn't just say that you *weren't* a Hero."
doesn't parse right for me. My brain keeps flip flopping between:
A) "You never said you *weren't* a Hero." - more a statement of fact
B) "Didn't you just say that you *weren't* a hero." - more a question than a statement
At least that's how I read it. But then again I have been known to have strange mental parse trees.
-Terry
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"so listen up boy, or pornography starring your mother will be the second worst thing to happen to you today"
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