Quote: Interesting narrative style. I was concerned when I started that it would get irritating, but it didn't. Nicely done.That was a concern for me too. I don't think I'd do anything longer in the style though, I think I was pushing it as it is. Maybe a few
short excerpts as part of a larger piece, but not an entire story.
Quote: no one can compete for attention with Mr. Whiskers.True, there's something irresistible about the button eyes, plush fur and a tendency to try to claw off bad people's faces.
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