Good call there, Wire; I've been trying to puzzle out what scene this piece was tripping off in my head. 
I really -really- like this bit. I always have a hard time writing in that style and usually end up taking another approach. Very well done.
(And now
I'm wishing, yet again, that I had mad artist skillz so I could draw this, because I can *see* it in my head, but I know if I put pen to paper it's
going to come out looking like Crayola meets the Drunken Monkey.)
--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs
I really -really- like this bit. I always have a hard time writing in that style and usually end up taking another approach. Very well done.
(And now
I'm wishing, yet again, that I had mad artist skillz so I could draw this, because I can *see* it in my head, but I know if I put pen to paper it's
going to come out looking like Crayola meets the Drunken Monkey.)
--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs