Yeah, Mag stole the cryo-tank prototype _years_ earlier, possibly decades. Bad Ops! Did Not Do The Research! *grin*
Edit: gah, post and preview, the banes of my existence.
As I was going to say...
Unless you're referring to an event long in the past, which is possible given the structure of the paragraph. But it doesn't read that way to me
initially. I think that's what you're trying to do, you just need to separate it out from the flow of current events somehow.
--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs
Edit: gah, post and preview, the banes of my existence.
As I was going to say...
Unless you're referring to an event long in the past, which is possible given the structure of the paragraph. But it doesn't read that way to me
initially. I think that's what you're trying to do, you just need to separate it out from the flow of current events somehow.
--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs