That observation meshes with my own, really. True randomness is in fact harder to get a handle on. It's one thing for me to RP Obsolete on an actual team - I have real-time input from other people and respond to it in weird ways. But creating stuff for her in a vaccuum is, I think, rather more difficult. It's one reason I haven't written much for her myself, in terms of narrative fiction.
Superball is different. Because his whole spiel is a deliberate act, he's easier to frame. He's like a comedian, he thinks up material, he says and does things to get a rise out of people... there's logic there, he's comprehensible. He's not actually insane.
I think you did it well, actually. Heck, I think you use both characters better, in some ways, than I could.
Feedback wise...I really like the Mace character model. Visually, I mean. That's some excellent work there. Story and presentation wise, the whole general exchange between Mace, the Warriors and Tsoo, plus Morgan and Bella...that whole sequence was really well done, I thought.
-- Acyl
Superball is different. Because his whole spiel is a deliberate act, he's easier to frame. He's like a comedian, he thinks up material, he says and does things to get a rise out of people... there's logic there, he's comprehensible. He's not actually insane.
I think you did it well, actually. Heck, I think you use both characters better, in some ways, than I could.
Feedback wise...I really like the Mace character model. Visually, I mean. That's some excellent work there. Story and presentation wise, the whole general exchange between Mace, the Warriors and Tsoo, plus Morgan and Bella...that whole sequence was really well done, I thought.
-- Acyl