Quote: The police officer snorted. "Are you sure you didn't already decide to go all femme?" he wondered. In reply, Robin punched him in the arm.
... sending the officer flying off the roof. "Oops," Robin muttered.
"... meDIc?" Leon whimpered from the street below.
(Sorry, that's the image that keeps coming to mind. She's faster and stronger, from what I've gathered... and Leon's, well, squishy.
)Anyway!
I've said it in IM, and I'll say it here: you're better at writing my character than I am, man. This is some great stuff... I'm looking
forward to seeing how it all pans out for Robin. I like that it's not coming across all angst-y; sure, there's some inner conflict there, but just
enough of it, rather than too much.
Nice work!
--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs