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Scimitar Stories: Aftermath
 
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Yay! more fic.

I'm not sure what I find so amusing about the interactions of manipulative psychic sociopaths, but it makes me smile.

And now I wonder who Battery Acid will be sending along.

A few minor typos I picked up:

"being read to"

ready*

"and was almost exhausted, but nearly there"

Not sure if you are a word short or long or missing a negative, but that doesn't sound quite right.

I should be asking you that," Nena said

Nene* right? unless I'm missing something.
-Terry
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"so listen up boy, or pornography starring your mother will be the second worst thing to happen to you today"
TF2: Spy
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Scimitar Stories: Aftermath - by OpMegs - 08-25-2010, 10:22 PM
[No subject] - by sweno - 08-26-2010, 04:23 AM
[No subject] - by Foxboy - 08-26-2010, 08:19 AM
[No subject] - by OpMegs - 08-26-2010, 11:19 AM
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