Well, the big thing with a movie map is that it isn't supposed to mainly be a 'hook'. Few people besides me and maybe the director would see this. It's basically a plot outline when you sit to write down a story. The only thing, if I were to show this off to someone in Holly/Bollywood, would see, is the Premise.
I don't mind people editing or pointing out flaws, however. I'd like to see where I made mistakes so I can try to avoid them later on.
I don't mind people editing or pointing out flaws, however. I'd like to see where I made mistakes so I can try to avoid them later on.