Looking through the entire Concordance, I noticed a rather common grammar error in the entry for Arithmancy in Chapter Two's notes: "... the fact that that Hermione ..."
The extra "that" has been there for a while; I doubt very many people would notice it if you leave it in until you post Chapter Four's concordance.
EDIT:
On to Chapter Three's concordance:
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012
The extra "that" has been there for a while; I doubt very many people would notice it if you leave it in until you post Chapter Four's concordance.
EDIT:
On to Chapter Three's concordance:
Quote:"kohai-sempai" relationshipsJust to finish off the comparison, the North American staff on Aria the Animation, Aria the Natural and Aria the Origination translated "kohai" as "junior".
For those readers who aren't also anime fans, "kohai" and "sempai" can, in this context, be roughly translated as "underclassman" and "upperclassman", but have strong overtones of "mentored" and "mentor"; another translation for "sempai" would be "senior".
--
Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012