I can't help but think this was a rather short chapter. Well written, but short.
Also, I liked the bits of Draco's letter scattered through the chapter. While they highlight that Draco is being quite the idiot by buying into the pureblood rhetoric, he's at the same time not stupid, and once you compensate for his myopic point of view and arrogance is quite smart in how easily he identifies Doug's position.
Also, I liked the bits of Draco's letter scattered through the chapter. While they highlight that Draco is being quite the idiot by buying into the pureblood rhetoric, he's at the same time not stupid, and once you compensate for his myopic point of view and arrogance is quite smart in how easily he identifies Doug's position.