It is after midnight...
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It is after midnight...
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Lovely. Good start and good hooks. An editing suggestion, if I may: Underline or otherwise change the font on the time/date stamp, so that it stands out.
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It is after midnight... - by Bob Schroeck - 04-01-2011, 06:25 AM
[No subject] - by Mark Skarr - 04-01-2011, 06:31 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 04-01-2011, 06:51 AM
[No subject] - by sweno - 04-01-2011, 08:24 AM
[No subject] - by Honorbridge - 04-01-2011, 12:02 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 04-01-2011, 02:49 PM
[No subject] - by Niteflier - 04-01-2011, 05:48 PM
[No subject] - by Proginoskes - 04-01-2011, 05:48 PM
[No subject] - by Ebony - 04-01-2011, 05:49 PM
[No subject] - by Wiregeek - 04-01-2011, 06:19 PM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 04-01-2011, 06:28 PM
[No subject] - by Duane Peters - 04-01-2011, 07:12 PM
[No subject] - by Star Ranger4 - 04-01-2011, 07:51 PM
[No subject] - by Foxboy - 04-01-2011, 08:01 PM
[No subject] - by Star Ranger4 - 04-01-2011, 08:29 PM
[No subject] - by Zojojojo - 04-01-2011, 08:48 PM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 04-02-2011, 09:41 AM
[No subject] - by Azunth - 04-02-2011, 09:59 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 04-02-2011, 11:16 PM
[No subject] - by Norgarth - 04-03-2011, 05:48 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 07-28-2012, 11:17 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 07-29-2012, 03:39 AM
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