Early Going, Bob. I wouldnt worry; we're still getting all the pieces in place in this chapter, for good or ill its not till you start to diverge that folks will really sit up and start talking.
Hear that thunder rolling till it seems to split the sky?
That's every ship in Grayson's Navy taking up the cry-
NO QUARTER!!!
-- "No Quarter", by Echo's Children
Hear that thunder rolling till it seems to split the sky?
That's every ship in Grayson's Navy taking up the cry-
NO QUARTER!!!
-- "No Quarter", by Echo's Children