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Thinking of doing a DW fanfic...
Re: My guess for this step....
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An extremely good guess... Here's the start of the fic, as it stands right now:

Local date unknown, Local time unknown

Once again, I opened my eyes and didn't see the face of the woman I wanted to see more than anyone else. Was I ever going to get home?
"He's waking up!" That was a child's voice, and she was speaking French.
I sat up and looked around. I was on a tropical beach, my cycle a few yards inland. I could have arrived in a worse place; hell, I *had* arrived in worse places in other worlds. A young girl and two teenagers (a girl and a boy) were looking at me with concern. "At the risk of sounding cliched, where am I?"
"I wish we knew," answered the older girl. "We just washed up on this shore a couple of hours ago."
"And then you showed up out of a ... hole in the air," added the boy. "What scientific principle allows for movement of that sort?"
I smiled at the boy. "That's a long story, lad, and we have other things to do if you just washed ashore. I assume you survived a shipwreck; where's your lifeboat?"
"It isn't a boat," said the younger girl. "It's the captain's cabin! I want to see him again."
"So do I," whispered the older girl.
The boy pointed out to sea. "It's caught on that reef, sir." Sure enough, there was a metal pod caught on a rock at the edge of the atoll. "I was going to build a boat and try to salvage what I could from it, but we decided to wait until you were awake before leaving you alone. Did I do the wrong thing?"
"You should have left one person here while the other two started salvaging what you needed ... but I'm glad you stayed to watch over me. By the way, we should introduce ourselves. My name is Douglas Sagnoir, but my friends call me Doug."
"I am Jean Ratlique," replied the boy, "and these are my friends, Marie and Nadia."

-Rob Kelk
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."

- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012
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Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 03-23-2005, 05:00 PM
Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 03-23-2005, 05:13 PM
Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 03-24-2005, 04:34 AM
Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by Acyl - 03-24-2005, 12:29 PM
Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 03-24-2005, 05:40 PM
Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-24-2005, 07:56 PM
Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 03-25-2005, 09:35 PM
My guess for this step.... - by Foxboy - 03-27-2005, 09:03 AM
Re: My guess for this step.... - by robkelk - 03-27-2005, 09:29 PM
Re: My guess for this step.... - by Bob Schroeck - 03-28-2005, 05:13 PM
Re: My guess for this step.... - by Bob Schroeck - 03-28-2005, 05:14 PM
Re: My guess for this step.... - by robkelk - 03-28-2005, 08:06 PM
Re: My guess for this step.... - by Bob Schroeck - 03-28-2005, 10:17 PM
Re: My guess for this step.... - by chibipoe - 03-29-2005, 08:44 AM
Re: My guess for this step.... - by Bob Schroeck - 03-29-2005, 04:46 PM
Re: My guess for this step.... - by chibipoe - 03-29-2005, 08:26 PM
Re: My guess for this step.... - by Bob Schroeck - 03-30-2005, 05:11 PM
Blue Skies, Blue Water - by robkelk - 04-01-2005, 02:09 AM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water - by Bob Schroeck - 04-01-2005, 05:10 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water - by robkelk - 04-01-2005, 05:18 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water - by Foxboy - 04-01-2005, 11:28 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water - by robkelk - 04-02-2005, 03:27 AM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water - by ClassicDrogn - 04-02-2005, 06:57 AM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 04-05-2005, 09:25 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 04-06-2005, 04:03 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 04-08-2005, 03:23 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 04-11-2005, 09:36 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 04-11-2005, 09:44 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 05-06-2005, 12:32 AM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by chibipoe - 05-06-2005, 09:56 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by chibipoe - 05-15-2005, 08:09 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by chibipoe - 05-16-2005, 09:23 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 05-17-2005, 01:07 AM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 05-18-2005, 12:47 AM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Shader - 05-18-2005, 03:32 AM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Foxboy - 05-18-2005, 05:23 AM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-01-2005, 04:21 AM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-01-2005, 03:15 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-02-2005, 01:43 AM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-03-2005, 02:55 AM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-03-2005, 02:59 AM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-03-2005, 03:52 AM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Foxboy - 06-06-2005, 05:02 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-06-2005, 08:28 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-08-2005, 03:36 AM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-17-2005, 02:14 AM
AAAARRRGGGHHH!!! - by SkyeFire - 06-17-2005, 09:24 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-18-2005, 01:07 AM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by DHBirr - 06-18-2005, 04:38 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-18-2005, 07:05 PM
Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Ebony - 06-20-2005, 11:40 PM
Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 09-14-2005, 07:56 PM
Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 09-15-2005, 02:46 AM
thoughts - by Murmur the Fallen - 09-20-2005, 01:53 AM
Re: thoughts - by robkelk - 09-20-2005, 04:17 AM
Re: thoughts - by Bob Schroeck - 09-20-2005, 02:08 PM
Re: thoughts - by DHBirr - 09-21-2005, 01:26 AM
Re: thoughts - by robkelk - 09-21-2005, 04:11 AM
Re: thoughts - by Bob Schroeck - 09-21-2005, 02:20 PM
New story fragment - by robkelk - 11-11-2005, 06:50 AM
Re: New story fragment - by Ebony - 11-11-2005, 07:39 PM
Re: New story fragment - by Bob Schroeck - 11-12-2005, 07:28 AM
Re: New story fragment - by robkelk - 11-13-2005, 05:07 AM
Re: New story fragment - by Bob Schroeck - 11-14-2005, 05:16 PM
Re: New story fragment - by robkelk - 11-15-2005, 04:01 AM
Re: New story fragment - by Bob Schroeck - 11-15-2005, 05:33 PM
Re: New story fragment - by robkelk - 11-16-2005, 07:15 AM
Re: New story fragment - by Bob Schroeck - 11-16-2005, 05:11 PM
Re: New story fragment - by robkelk - 12-06-2005, 03:32 AM
Re: New story fragment - by Bob Schroeck - 12-06-2005, 05:10 PM
Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 01-15-2006, 05:27 AM
Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by DHBirr - 01-16-2006, 06:53 PM
New fragment from early in Chapter 2 - by robkelk - 02-04-2006, 02:36 AM
A fragment from Chapter 1 - by robkelk - 03-30-2006, 07:33 AM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Bob Schroeck - 03-30-2006, 05:13 PM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Ebony - 03-30-2006, 08:33 PM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Bob Schroeck - 03-30-2006, 09:57 PM
Random thought - by Foxboy - 03-30-2006, 11:33 PM
Re: Random thought - by ClassicDrogn - 03-31-2006, 12:21 AM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Ebony - 03-31-2006, 01:09 AM
Eating meat is murder - by Florin - 04-05-2006, 05:40 PM
Rob: A Song To Use... - by Bob Schroeck - 04-06-2006, 04:36 AM
Re: Rob: A Song To Use... - by robkelk - 04-06-2006, 03:44 PM
Re: Rob: A Song To Use... - by Bob Schroeck - 04-06-2006, 07:00 PM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by robkelk - 04-11-2006, 03:22 AM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by VladimirTherin - 04-13-2006, 06:31 AM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by DHBirr - 04-13-2006, 07:07 PM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by robkelk - 04-27-2006, 02:23 AM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Bob Schroeck - 04-27-2006, 02:04 PM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Ebony - 04-27-2006, 05:37 PM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Bob Schroeck - 04-27-2006, 07:09 PM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by robkelk - 04-28-2006, 01:44 AM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Bob Schroeck - 04-28-2006, 03:02 AM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by robkelk - 04-29-2006, 12:04 AM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by DHBirr - 04-29-2006, 02:13 AM
Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by robkelk - 04-29-2006, 06:41 PM
Chapter 4 Omake - by robkelk - 05-30-2006, 03:09 AM
Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by DHBirr - 05-30-2006, 04:22 AM
Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by Bob Schroeck - 05-30-2006, 07:07 PM
Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by robkelk - 05-31-2006, 01:07 AM
Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by Stephen Mann - 05-31-2006, 03:42 AM
Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by robkelk - 06-24-2006, 10:14 PM
Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by Bob Schroeck - 06-26-2006, 04:47 AM
Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by DHBirr - 06-27-2006, 02:21 AM
Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by robkelk - 06-27-2006, 03:01 AM
Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by Bob Schroeck - 06-27-2006, 04:23 AM
Re: Nautilus - by DHBirr - 09-21-2006, 03:08 AM
Re: Nautilus - by robkelk - 09-21-2006, 03:59 AM
Re: Nautilus - by Bob Schroeck - 09-21-2006, 04:09 AM
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