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Thinking of doing a DW fanfic...

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Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2)

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06-17-2005, 02:17 PM

I like. My only concern is that it makes Doug look a lot more cruel than he really is -- I hope there's sufficient provocation in chapter 2.
Characterization thought of the day: Doug despairing of anyone getting his jokes because all his pop culture references are a century out of date, in the wrong direction to boot.
Silly dialogue idea #1 of the day: "Wasn't this tank considerably smaller a few minutes ago?" -- Doug, looking around during one of those points in the story when the Gratan seems to be the size of a small house inside
Silly dialogue idea #2 of the day: "Just pour cheese sauce on us and call us Refugees au Gratan."

-- Bob
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It's spelt "Frodo Baggins" but it's pronounced "Throat-wobbler Mangrove."

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Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 03-23-2005, 05:00 PM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by Bob Schroeck - 03-23-2005, 05:04 PM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 03-23-2005, 05:13 PM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by Bob Schroeck - 03-23-2005, 09:49 PM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 03-24-2005, 04:34 AM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by Acyl - 03-24-2005, 12:29 PM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by Bob Schroeck - 03-24-2005, 05:03 PM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by ClassicDrogn - 03-24-2005, 05:20 PM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 03-24-2005, 05:40 PM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-24-2005, 07:56 PM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by Bob Schroeck - 03-25-2005, 04:58 PM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 03-25-2005, 09:35 PM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by Bob Schroeck - 03-25-2005, 10:00 PM

My guess for this step.... - by Foxboy - 03-27-2005, 09:03 AM

Re: My guess for this step.... - by robkelk - 03-27-2005, 09:29 PM

Re: My guess for this step.... - by Bob Schroeck - 03-28-2005, 05:13 PM

Re: My guess for this step.... - by Bob Schroeck - 03-28-2005, 05:14 PM

Re: My guess for this step.... - by robkelk - 03-28-2005, 08:06 PM

Re: My guess for this step.... - by Bob Schroeck - 03-28-2005, 10:17 PM

Re: My guess for this step.... - by chibipoe - 03-29-2005, 08:44 AM

Re: My guess for this step.... - by Bob Schroeck - 03-29-2005, 04:46 PM

Re: My guess for this step.... - by chibipoe - 03-29-2005, 08:26 PM

Re: My guess for this step.... - by Bob Schroeck - 03-30-2005, 05:11 PM

Blue Skies, Blue Water - by robkelk - 04-01-2005, 02:09 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water - by Bob Schroeck - 04-01-2005, 05:10 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water - by robkelk - 04-01-2005, 05:18 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water - by Foxboy - 04-01-2005, 11:28 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water - by robkelk - 04-02-2005, 03:27 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water - by ClassicDrogn - 04-02-2005, 06:57 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 04-05-2005, 09:25 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 04-06-2005, 01:55 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 04-06-2005, 04:03 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 04-08-2005, 03:23 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 04-11-2005, 07:02 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 04-11-2005, 07:05 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 04-11-2005, 09:36 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 04-11-2005, 09:44 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 04-12-2005, 01:55 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 05-06-2005, 12:32 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 05-06-2005, 01:59 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by chibipoe - 05-06-2005, 09:56 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 05-07-2005, 01:24 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 05-15-2005, 05:50 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by chibipoe - 05-15-2005, 08:09 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 05-16-2005, 02:08 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by chibipoe - 05-16-2005, 09:23 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 05-17-2005, 01:07 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 05-17-2005, 04:48 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 05-18-2005, 12:47 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Shader - 05-18-2005, 03:32 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Foxboy - 05-18-2005, 05:23 AM

Re: Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 05-26-2005, 02:30 PM

Re: Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Logan Darklighter - 05-27-2005, 01:44 PM

Re: Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 05-27-2005, 02:25 PM

Re: Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 05-27-2005, 02:42 PM

Re: Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 05-31-2005, 07:18 PM

Re: Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 05-31-2005, 07:19 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-01-2005, 04:21 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 06-01-2005, 02:12 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-01-2005, 03:15 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 06-01-2005, 06:59 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-02-2005, 01:43 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Star Ranger4 - 06-02-2005, 05:12 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 06-02-2005, 07:07 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-03-2005, 02:55 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-03-2005, 02:59 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-03-2005, 03:52 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 06-06-2005, 02:31 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Foxboy - 06-06-2005, 05:02 PM

Re: Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 06-06-2005, 07:06 PM

Re: Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-06-2005, 08:16 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-06-2005, 08:28 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 06-07-2005, 06:21 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 06-07-2005, 06:48 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-08-2005, 03:36 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-17-2005, 02:14 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 06-17-2005, 02:17 PM

AAAARRRGGGHHH!!! - by SkyeFire - 06-17-2005, 09:24 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-18-2005, 01:07 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 06-18-2005, 02:17 AM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by DHBirr - 06-18-2005, 04:38 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 06-18-2005, 07:05 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 06-20-2005, 02:17 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Ebony - 06-20-2005, 11:40 PM

Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 06-21-2005, 06:55 PM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 09-14-2005, 07:56 PM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by Bob Schroeck - 09-15-2005, 01:02 AM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 09-15-2005, 02:46 AM

thoughts - by Murmur the Fallen - 09-20-2005, 01:53 AM

Re: thoughts - by robkelk - 09-20-2005, 04:17 AM

Re: thoughts - by Bob Schroeck - 09-20-2005, 02:08 PM

Re: thoughts - by DHBirr - 09-21-2005, 01:26 AM

Re: thoughts - by robkelk - 09-21-2005, 04:11 AM

Re: thoughts - by Bob Schroeck - 09-21-2005, 02:20 PM

New story fragment - by robkelk - 11-11-2005, 06:50 AM

Re: New story fragment - by Ebony - 11-11-2005, 07:39 PM

Re: New story fragment - by Bob Schroeck - 11-12-2005, 07:28 AM

Re: New story fragment - by robkelk - 11-13-2005, 05:07 AM

Re: New story fragment - by Bob Schroeck - 11-14-2005, 05:16 PM

Re: New story fragment - by robkelk - 11-15-2005, 04:01 AM

Re: New story fragment - by Bob Schroeck - 11-15-2005, 05:33 PM

Re: New story fragment - by robkelk - 11-16-2005, 07:15 AM

Re: New story fragment - by Bob Schroeck - 11-16-2005, 05:11 PM

Re: New story fragment - by robkelk - 12-06-2005, 03:32 AM

Re: New story fragment - by Bob Schroeck - 12-06-2005, 05:10 PM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by robkelk - 01-15-2006, 05:27 AM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by Bob Schroeck - 01-15-2006, 06:40 AM

Re: Thinking of doing a DW fanfic... - by DHBirr - 01-16-2006, 06:53 PM

Great intro, just gotta recycle it a bit.... - by Foxboy - 01-16-2006, 08:07 PM

Re: Great intro, just gotta recycle it a bit.... - by Bob Schroeck - 01-16-2006, 10:00 PM

New fragment from early in Chapter 2 - by robkelk - 02-04-2006, 02:36 AM

Re: New fragment from early in Chapter 2 - by Bob Schroeck - 02-04-2006, 03:33 AM

Two fragments from early in Chapter 3 - by robkelk - 03-10-2006, 03:26 AM

Re: Two fragments from early in Chapter 3 - by Bob Schroeck - 03-10-2006, 05:01 PM

A fragment from Chapter 1 - by robkelk - 03-30-2006, 07:33 AM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Bob Schroeck - 03-30-2006, 05:13 PM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Ebony - 03-30-2006, 08:33 PM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Bob Schroeck - 03-30-2006, 09:57 PM

Random thought - by Foxboy - 03-30-2006, 11:33 PM

Re: Random thought - by ClassicDrogn - 03-31-2006, 12:21 AM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Ebony - 03-31-2006, 01:09 AM

Re: Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by robkelk - 03-31-2006, 07:33 AM

Re: Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by DHBirr - 03-31-2006, 03:25 PM

Re: Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 03-31-2006, 05:03 PM

Re: Re: Blue Skies, Blue Water (take 2) - by Bob Schroeck - 03-31-2006, 05:07 PM

Eating meat is murder - by Florin - 04-05-2006, 05:40 PM

Rob: A Song To Use... - by Bob Schroeck - 04-06-2006, 04:36 AM

Re: Rob: A Song To Use... - by robkelk - 04-06-2006, 03:44 PM

Re: Rob: A Song To Use... - by Bob Schroeck - 04-06-2006, 07:00 PM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by robkelk - 04-11-2006, 03:22 AM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by VladimirTherin - 04-13-2006, 06:31 AM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by DHBirr - 04-13-2006, 07:07 PM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by robkelk - 04-27-2006, 02:23 AM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Bob Schroeck - 04-27-2006, 02:04 PM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Ebony - 04-27-2006, 05:37 PM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Bob Schroeck - 04-27-2006, 07:09 PM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by robkelk - 04-28-2006, 01:44 AM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by Bob Schroeck - 04-28-2006, 03:02 AM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by robkelk - 04-29-2006, 12:04 AM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by DHBirr - 04-29-2006, 02:13 AM

Re: A fragment from Chapter 1 - by robkelk - 04-29-2006, 06:41 PM

Something which may or may not go into Chapter 3 - by robkelk - 05-06-2006, 12:53 AM

Re: Something which may or may not go into Chapter 3 - by Logan Darklighter - 05-06-2006, 11:09 AM

Chapter 4 Omake - by robkelk - 05-30-2006, 03:09 AM

Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by DHBirr - 05-30-2006, 04:22 AM

Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by Bob Schroeck - 05-30-2006, 07:07 PM

Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by robkelk - 05-31-2006, 01:07 AM

Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by Stephen Mann - 05-31-2006, 03:42 AM

Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by robkelk - 06-24-2006, 10:14 PM

Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by Bob Schroeck - 06-26-2006, 04:47 AM

Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by DHBirr - 06-27-2006, 02:21 AM

Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by robkelk - 06-27-2006, 03:01 AM

Re: Chapter 4 Omake - by Bob Schroeck - 06-27-2006, 04:23 AM

Re: Nautilus - by DHBirr - 09-21-2006, 03:08 AM

Re: Nautilus - by robkelk - 09-21-2006, 03:59 AM

Re: Nautilus - by Bob Schroeck - 09-21-2006, 04:09 AM

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