Thinking of doing a DW fanfic...

[robkelk]

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I like.

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Thanks.

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My only concern is that it makes Doug look a lot more cruel than he really is -- I hope there's sufficient provocation in chapter 2.

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Well... You recall the scene where Ayerton convinces Grandis to sneak away with him in the Gratan by lying to her about wine? One extra thing he'll have done beforehand is drain the fuel from Doug's bike into the Gratan's fuel tank (to him, fuel's fuel - luckily, ethanol won't hurt that sort of engine), which will slow down Doug, Sanson, and Hanson when they think to use the bike to go after Ayerton. When they finally arrive at the point where Ayerton parked the Gratan, they'll find that he got somewhat farther with Grandis than he did in the canon. (How much farther, I haven't decided. But at the least, there will be some torn clothing...)
-Rob Kelk
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
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the same sovereign, servants of the same law."

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