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Crab's Claws [L5R]
Elsa Bibat
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#8
01-22-2008, 03:30 PM
Quote:The Dragon rose, bowed to Kisada and then left.

"What do they guard?" the Phoenix asked again.

"The Black Scrolls," Kisada revealed and even he shuddered alongside Ujimitsu, himself in no sense a nervous man, at the very mention of the scrolls.

I think you interchanged Kisada and Ujimitsu. And Crab can't stomp over everyone - they're kinda always the one that get stomped on first by the Shadowlands. ^_^
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Crab's Claws [L5R] - by drakensis - 01-21-2008, 02:37 AM
Re: Crab's Claws [L5R] - by Norgarth - 01-21-2008, 07:41 AM
Re: Crab's Claws [L5R] - by Elsa Bibat - 01-21-2008, 05:54 PM
[No subject] - by anowack - 01-22-2008, 04:10 AM
[No subject] - by Elsa Bibat - 01-22-2008, 05:36 AM
[No subject] - by Elsa Bibat - 01-22-2008, 05:37 AM
re: Crab's Claws - by drakensis - 01-22-2008, 12:03 PM
[No subject] - by Elsa Bibat - 01-22-2008, 03:30 PM
Crab's Claws [L5R] - by drakensis - 01-22-2008, 08:14 PM

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