Bah.
All my favorite stuff of Ornstead's involves things going completely out of control. The problem in this case seems to me that ~Lockhart (thanks to way too much information about the future) doesn't have a whole lot of genuine problems to deal with, so the story ends up going off on rather dubious tangents. (See: Star Trek? o.O )
(Thinking about it, this is pretty much the probelm I had with the last-bit-I-know-of of Bubblegum Boy...)
Skysaber's Choice on the other hand, never fails to present some new issue to deal with at every turn, which is why I enjoy the entire thing (and would really like to see more of it).
But I suppose this should probably go to the thread we already have about this story. '.'
-Morgan, thinks "mind control" would be stretching things a bit..."Mikuru-chan molested me! I'm... so happy!"
-Haruhi, "The Ecchi of Haruhi Suzumiya"
---(Not really)
All my favorite stuff of Ornstead's involves things going completely out of control. The problem in this case seems to me that ~Lockhart (thanks to way too much information about the future) doesn't have a whole lot of genuine problems to deal with, so the story ends up going off on rather dubious tangents. (See: Star Trek? o.O )
(Thinking about it, this is pretty much the probelm I had with the last-bit-I-know-of of Bubblegum Boy...)
Skysaber's Choice on the other hand, never fails to present some new issue to deal with at every turn, which is why I enjoy the entire thing (and would really like to see more of it).
But I suppose this should probably go to the thread we already have about this story. '.'
-Morgan, thinks "mind control" would be stretching things a bit..."Mikuru-chan molested me! I'm... so happy!"
-Haruhi, "The Ecchi of Haruhi Suzumiya"
---(Not really)